Black Tar

[~Sophia~]

Lambent the sun’s early morning wash.
The horizon rolling out its tongue - an
asphalt kiss of a lingual nerve

my affair with the end of the road. Metaphysical
sky, igneous clouds drifting, raconteurs
the finish always just ahead

a tera cotta abduction.

[breathtest]

Full of fantastic imagery and interesting notions. A mysterious little poem with lots of meaning packed into just seven lines...

[~Sophia~]

Hi breathtest. Sorry to respond so late. I was on a camping trip. Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it!

[Dark Muse]

Quite interesting, provoctative imagery

[paperleaves]

wow. how do you do that?
i have no words to describe how beautiful those few lines are. thank you for sharing, as always, you have inspired me greatly!

[~Sophia~]

Hi Dark Muse... thanks for reading and commenting!

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Hello again paperleaves... believe me, the feeling is mutual! Thanks!