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Free Falcon
07-01-2009, 04:02 PM
Love shedding
from my exhausted heart
seems like blood?
No.But like red wine

The wound getting larger
the love getting
more and more fragrant

pink drops
fall on the the earth
drop by drop
white orchids grow

In the morning of the early spring
A fragrance
of the white orchids
was telling the dew
about my exhausted herat
which has vanished
after it has shed
the last drop of love
but
it left behind
its immortal fragrance.

blazeofglory
07-03-2009, 11:55 PM
You falcon, your flight against eternity is really exhausting. Take a little respite and assume the journey again.

Free Falcon
07-05-2009, 12:44 PM
You falcon, your flight against eternity is really exhausting. Take a little respite and assume the journey again.
I`ll try :)
Thank you very much for reading and commenting
All the best.