When i kiss you

[Free Falcon]

When i kiss you,
the lips of my soul,
taste the wine
of your lips.

My eyes sink
deeply in yours.

My senses
leave their earthy nature
and fly highly
in a pink horizon
which has been created
only for lovers

.
When i kiss you,
The fragrance of happiness
is the only thing i sense
when the roses
lose their significance,
compared to your lips.

When i kiss you,
i leave the tiny earth
and become a creature,
full of light and melodies
on a planet
of love and glory

[breathtest]

Wow free falcon. I like it, very intense and delicate. Welcome to Litnet.

'the lips of my soul taste the wine of your lips' I like this image of the binding and coming together of every part of these two people.

[Free Falcon]

Wow free falcon. I like it, very intense and delicate. Welcome to Litnet.

'the lips of my soul taste the wine of your lips' I like this image of the binding and coming together of every part of these two people.
Thank you breathtest
It is always a great pleasure for me to read your comments, which encourage me to continue writing in english
Best of thanks

[billl]

yeah, great. lovers are transported, you write of that magic here, and no cliches, great...

[Buh4Bee]

I think is it quite original. I connected to the emotional purity of this love and the lovely serenity between these two lovers. It is not cheesy by any means.

[Free Falcon]

Wow free falcon. I like it, very intense and delicate. Welcome to Litnet.

'the lips of my soul taste the wine of your lips' I like this image of the binding and coming together of every part of these two people.
Thanks alot for the positive opinion
I appreciate that

[paperleaves]

Breathtest, you perfectly described this poem by using the words "intense" and "delicate". That is precisely what this is, a poem I appreciate very much for its strength AND fragility. In the beginning, it was so simple, but as the stanzas progressed, its vibrance emitted an emotion I haven't felt in a long time...BEAUTIFUL work, free falcon.

[Free Falcon]

I think is it quite original. I connected to the emotional purity of this love and the lovely serenity between these two lovers. It is not cheesy by any means.
Jersea Thank you for keep me going.
Your nice words encouraged to me to keep writing , despite the lingual barrier
Thank you all my friends
I am proud of you all!

[Free Falcon]

yeah, great. lovers are transported, you write of that magic here, and no cliches, great...


Thank you for the kind words
Best of thanks