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symphony
06-24-2009, 09:06 PM
A rainless window. And I,
indifferent, parsed the night,
absently twined the wind at ease
between my fingers tracing
the city silhouettes. Contoured
a new night in this newfound
canvas.


Wings
of dormant birds are beating low.
The mind is slow.
The speed of this hand
perpetual in its want to wipe off
the sacrilege of far-off neon-lights--
surly outlanders of the night.


With the wind the voice
of a waif whose night it is
comes in a slow, broken song.
I know the child, I know
the passerby who cut him off.
I know the city’s skyline divides
the night,
this night I don’t know, can’t remember.


It must rain tonight.
For me to write it must.
Wash this window off its obscenities,
off the cities and off their lights
of filths, and flashes, and flames.


Where is the love in this?
Where are the Persian poets
of love? One can only wake up
in muslin mornings and feel Hafez gaze
at a similar silken air,
twining the same wind
in knowing fingers.
And mornings become
of memories of tombstones…

you, who is cast away
from man and sanctioned company
you, who here must assay
Love: this be your sanctuary.


And it must rain this dawn.
For me to live it must.
The city must hang
in the camera obscura,
the moon a mere fresco
in a moonspurned room.


- Symphony

~Sophia~
06-24-2009, 09:36 PM
This is simply wonderful. I tried to find a favorite stanza to highlight but would have ended up highlighting the whole poem. Beautifully written!

Between Horizon
06-24-2009, 11:42 PM
This is poem is pretty sweet. It isn't what I usually write about but it is good. Great job!

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MorpheusSandman
06-25-2009, 12:52 AM
A superb poem! The imagery and word selection are truly remarkable; That first stanza especially contains a couple of really stand-out parts in "parsed the night" "tracing the silhouettes of the city".

Pendragon
06-25-2009, 08:12 AM
Wonderful! :thumbs_up

PrinceMyshkin
06-25-2009, 09:45 AM
More like rapture than merely an excellent poem! If you can write like this (and obviously you can!), how can you stand to do anything else?

A quibble (?): Surely most of the "off"s in the 4th stanza are meant to be "of"s?

symphony
06-25-2009, 11:34 AM
A quibble (?): Surely most of the "off"s in the 4th stanza are meant to be "of"s?

It's perfect as it is :D


And thanks to everyone who read and commented! :D

paperleaves
07-01-2009, 11:04 AM
This is an extremely beautiful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed "It must rain tonight.
For me to write it must.
Wash this window off its obscenities,
off the cities and off their lights
of filths, and flashes, and flames"

thank you for sharing!

Virgil
07-11-2009, 04:13 PM
I agree, this is wonderful. Symphony is writing again and we are so blessed to be readers. :)

PrinceMyshkin
07-11-2009, 04:16 PM
I agree, this is wonderful. Symphony is writing again and we are so blessed to be readers. :)

"Writing" may be an understatement. In the case of this and her newest, singing might be the more appropriate verb.

Beautifull
07-11-2009, 06:58 PM
oh, it was amazing! i love your poems!
It must rain this dawn
for me to live it must...

that was so beautifull...i could almost hear the very-much-wanted rain falling!