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Chava
06-24-2009, 02:06 PM
Transcend from crying into weeping,
Explode in violent gasps for air,
Cry as though for an audience,
Though no one can hear your despair,
As it wrings you to the depths of your composition.
You feel violated as it rips your personality from you,
Broken, and emotionally raped, psychologically dismissed,
And broken by the nightmares,
That stalk you in your dreams, shadows
That glower over your joyous nightly adventures.
Twisting your vision into evil images,
Of hate, anger, vengefulness, and dreaming
Of cold metal tapped against your temple,
Always fearing the metallic click on your neck,
Hearing the running feet, and feeling disaster.
Towered always by the sensation of disaster,
Disaster that turns you into a cynic, distrusting
Yourself, and even your senses, making you miserable
Making you cry. It’s left you huddled in the shower,
Dressed, as you’re soaked by the tap. And
Each heartbreaking sob of disaster is silenced by the water.

Justin Rockwell
06-24-2009, 02:10 PM
Very dark. My pants are wet lol. This whole poem sounds like a movie scene. Very good.

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Between Horizon
06-24-2009, 11:46 PM
It is very dark and wonderful at the same time. Great work!

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