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rtc143
06-24-2009, 02:58 AM
I believe I will use this as a segment- like thing. Maybe every week I'll post something new feel free to respond.

I feel as if the world is shunning me
casting me aside into some altered reality
where am I? why does it hurt so?
to be here among these faces
with only one word stitched across their mouths
NO
oh how i ate that dreadful word,no
awful it is, always bringing about rejection
and to be honest
Rejection's a huge *****...

Justin Rockwell
06-24-2009, 11:46 AM
LOL, this sounds more like a blog rant than poetry, but I guess that makes it unique. But pretty good. I like the staright up "NO" line.

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