A summer Day

[Free Falcon]

On the sand,
The pace of the Wind ,
wrote a story ,
of two lovers ..
- Perhaps --

Gulls are crying
And maybe laughing ,
No difference ..
Because waves are loud
- As usual --

And the sea
is Blue
- As usual --
But people argue ,
-- By habbit --
- Sea is blue
because of the exessive of anger
on the sky
- No . Its blue is a false one
which Imitates the sky`s face.

A third one omes from the far coast ..
and shouts:
- Stop your stupid arguments
The color of the sea is blue ,
Since tearing the dress of the sky
I say: Its blue goes away with the evening
She says: Its extends from my eyes
But the sea continues,
to move in a tide, and does not care.



Bronze body
is relaxing in the hands of the sun
Two thirsty eyes
are observing
Lickerish is roaming throughg the summer
Brimful of dreams .

Wet hair,
Whenever shaken
some water is dropping

Dru lips of a youngman
due to waiting
- Perhaps --
Or perhaps a natural thirst
Because the sea water
- Despite its clarity --
is a salty

Rod extends for fun
At its end ,
there is a deception

I looked arround,
she has gone
No problem
her feet wrote on the sands
For Long!

[breathtest]

I utterly adore the way you have structured this, free falcon. It flows freely from word to word and line to line.

[Pendragon]

Nice structure, indeed. Watch spelling...

[Free Falcon]

I utterly adore the way you have structured this, free falcon. It flows freely from word to word and line to line.
Thanks alot breathest
Actually this is my first try to write in english
i expected much of critisizm :)
I am so glad to read your kind words
All the best

[Free Falcon]

Nice structure, indeed. Watch spelling...
Thankj you pendragon
Yes..you are right..i have to concern over spelling because i rushed to publish, so i didn`t give the needed time to edit it
Best of thanks