conversational thoughts with a silent man

[ahsiam]

live beneath a man
when his love bounds no more-
as it never did:
a rest,peace begets-
so soft, so calm inside-yet eloquent.


melody of complaining flute
that melodied inside-
to be remembered
as dying with its each note is unanswered.
pensile beauty of love that burns inside-
as i longed to be enamoured with you.


mind not to be lowed for once
as my heart is enough innocent to be dead-
when you are gone.

[symphony]

I can feel where it comes from... and I wish I could feel where it goes.

(by the way, in the 5th line- did you mean "pensive"?)

[Pendragon]

melody of complaining flute
that melodied inside-
to be remembered
as dying with its each note is unanswered.

Beautiful lines... :thumbs_up

[ahsiam]

@symphony i hope u like it sweety. Na its not pensive, its pensile... Thanks for giving a comment :)

[ahsiam]

@uncle pen..
Thank u uncle pen :D. To tell u da truth these r my favourite too

[qimissung]

I love the title...is this about an unrequited love? Whatever you are speaking of, it is indeed eloquent..".pensile beauty of love that burns inside..." have we not all felt that!

[ahsiam]

thanks Qimissung for your inspiring comment. No its not about an unrequited love. Its about a silent man about whom the girl never knew.