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LeonClaire
06-10-2009, 02:35 PM
What do you think?

Synopsis

John is a part time demon nothing much is different about him, only a demon called “Serogos” will give him 3 wishes of his choice, in return “Serogos” will be allowed to turn him into a full demon and become flesh instead of invisible, this is a burden John’s father and his father before him, at to carry. John keeps refusing “Serogos” until he starts to dream about a gorgeous girl named Andrea, these dreams go on and on for a few months, he then starts to dream of 4 different ways she is going to die, he knows the date and when it’s going happen, but he doesn’t where, the hint of her on top of a huge city building is the only a link, he unable to tell which building, John may have to accept to the idea of “Serogos” proposal, otherwise the woman he has fallen in love with, in his dreams is going to die.

krispykritta
06-10-2009, 08:55 PM
sounds interesting

Buh4Bee
06-10-2009, 09:01 PM
If you haven't read "Twilight", you maybe interested. The themes of love and the supernatural that are in your story are also in the aforementioned book.

Could be a good story is written well.