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Biggus
06-02-2009, 08:58 AM
ALL OF MY LIFE

All of my life
I have had no talent
Hidden or on show
No gift or endowment
No skill or mastery
No bent or flair
Ability or forte
Nothing to mark me out
From the common herd
Or stand me out from the crowd

All of my life
I have been ordinary
Mediocre and average
Quite mundane and everyday
No hint of genius
Expert only in my ordinariness
But content in my mediocrity

All of my life
I have been un-ambitious
No goals to be achieved
Not driven by desire
In any shape or form
Some might say shiftless
I would say satisfied
Happy with my lot

All of my life
I lived a half life
Until my outlook changed
When I saw you smile
And heard you speak my name
I was born again
With new purpose
A new vocation
To shed my mediocrity
And cast it aside
Like a well used coat
And dig deep within myself
To find that dying ember of desire
That almost imperceptible spark
So clearly visible to you
And breathe life into it
Until white hot
And then fan the flames of passion
You have ignited in me

All the rest of my life
Endowed with your gift
I will feel extraordinary
And with my new found ambition
My one and only goal
The soul purpose of my being
Is to make you truly happy
As happy as you have made me
And with all my heart and soul
I will dedicate myself
To always loving you

blazeofglory
06-06-2009, 10:14 AM
ALL OF MY LIFE

All of my life
I have had no talent
Hidden or on show
No gift or endowment
No skill or mastery
No bent or flair
Ability or forte
Nothing to mark me out
From the common herd
Or stand me out from the crowd

All of my life
I have been ordinary
Mediocre and average
Quite mundane and everyday
No hint of genius
Expert only in my ordinariness
But content in my mediocrity

All of my life
I have been un-ambitious
No goals to be achieved
Not driven by desire
In any shape or form
Some might say shiftless
I would say satisfied
Happy with my lot

All of my life
I lived a half life
Until my outlook changed
When I saw you smile
And heard you speak my name
I was born again
With new purpose
A new vocation
To shed my mediocrity
And cast it aside
Like a well used coat
And dig deep within myself
To find that dying ember of desire
That almost imperceptible spark
So clearly visible to you
And breathe life into it
Until white hot
And then fan the flames of passion
You have ignited in me

All the rest of my life
Endowed with your gift
I will feel extraordinary
And with my new found ambition
My one and only goal
The soul purpose of my being
Is to make you truly happy
As happy as you have made me
And with all my heart and soul
I will dedicate myself
To always loving you

This is the case with me too!!!

Biggus
06-08-2009, 06:57 AM
Thank you

PrinceMyshkin
06-08-2009, 03:33 PM
It's interesting how your humility changes and yet

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and yet it does not change since at the end, instead of boasting about your new-found confidence and purpose, you attribute the whole of it to her effect on you!

MorpheusSandman
06-08-2009, 06:36 PM
It's quite nice; it actually reminds me of an elegiac poem of my own I wrote with similar reprises.

Biggus
06-12-2009, 09:16 AM
Thank you both

kiz_paws
06-16-2009, 03:06 AM
I enjoyed your beautiful poem immensely, Biggus. :)

Biggus
07-14-2009, 05:38 AM
Thank you very much

Buh4Bee
07-15-2009, 05:37 PM
ambition comes in many forms, but this one is the best! Love. Nice expression. :)

Biggus
07-17-2009, 06:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comments