life

[peter7805]

To come from the emptiness

And to go to the eternity

The beginning and the end

Are the same body



Well, to walk on the way

I exist as i am truly

life is a journey

in which lie all the philosophy



To think, my friend

Let life be great and splendid

[blazeofglory]

To come from the emptiness

And to go to the eternity

The beginning and the end

Are the same body



Well, to walk on the way

I exist as i am truly

life is a journey

in which lie all the philosophy



To think, my friend

Let life be great and splendid

Of course life is like that!

[AuntShecky]

Beware of abstractions.

[Amylian]

It has a musical sense in it and you could extend the poem a lot more if you attempted to; it could be better...

Also, one more thing you have to take into account is that your sentences are all 'run-on' ones and we do not know when to stop. You should be careful about this...