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peter7805
05-30-2009, 10:36 AM
Turn around and you please

Open your eyes and see

To you a dragonfly is flying

Hold in the eyes my missing



Passing your eyes

Like i sail across the sea

Wide and bright



To you a dragonfly is coming

Around your ears it flies

The humming seems my calling

Thousands and thousands of times



Falls on your lips a deep kiss I shall plant

It will be one flower a thousand years later

Tender and fresh

blazeofglory
06-06-2009, 11:17 AM
It is really formidably penetrating!!!

qimissung
06-06-2009, 11:36 AM
...and very mystical...I love this fresh perspective. It makes me see the world with new eyes, which is what I love about poetry. And I love the ending, so tender and sweet.