Just words

[The Walker]

Don't rely on my words
they're just words.
Dont rely on my plans
they're just my mind.
I'm just a human voice
against an unstopable force.

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Listen what I say
and believe me.
Let us plan for May
you just follow me.
Walk with me today
can you just love me?

[zanna]

I like this! Thanks for sharing it with us. =)

[skib]

Very nice Walker! I enjoyed it very much.

[The Walker]

Thanks guys. Appreciatted! :)

[qimissung]

You have a gift for simplicity and getting to the heart of the matter, kind of like PrinceMyshkin. Good one, Walker.

[haymanali]

Don't rely on my words
they're just words.
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Listen what I say
and believe me.


A reasonable and pleasant reasoning.

[Pendragon]

Don't rely on my words
they're just words.
Dont rely on my plans
they're just my mind.
I'm just a human voice
against an unstopable force.



Loved this first stanza!

[The Walker]

Qimissung -- You are so kind! Thanks for your comment :)

Haymanali -- Thanks for the letting me know your favorite lines :) I think both compliment each other but I wasn't sure to post it as one, you know?

Pendragon -- thank you! i'm so flattered! since I've read some of your work and think they're great. thanks for comming by, appreciate it :)

[Lokasenna]

Good stuff - short and punchy. I love the use of repetition as well - its very effective!

[The Walker]

hey lokasenna, thank you very much :)