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Lyn05
05-14-2009, 03:26 AM
She cried
Tears glistening in the light
Like diamonds
And I put my hands to my face, just as she did
To tell her I understood
But she never said a thing

She was overjoyed
Hands in the air
Elegant as a dancer’s
And I lifted my hands, just as she did
To show that I shared her joy
But she never noticed

She slept
Breaths calm and steady
Like a soothing hymn
And I laid down, just as she did
To show I was with her
But she never realised
Because

She
Was a person
And I,
A mere silhouette

ampoule
05-14-2009, 08:32 AM
You really had me believing there were two people. I like surprise endings and yours was good. Then I heard the loneliness. I wish I could have figured it out without you telling me though.

I draw around the shadows of my students each February. They love it.

Lyn05
05-16-2009, 10:58 AM
I'm glad you liked it. :) I remember my class got to trace each others' silhouettes too. It was really fun.

Moshu
05-16-2009, 11:42 AM
Oh wow. I really love it! Very different!