for my fiance...

[Tournesol]

Knowing that you love me
Makes me feel safe.
There's a tranquility
That comes
Everytime I think of you.
And then,
Deep nostalgia sets in...
Silent tears
Because all I want at that moment
Is to hold you to me,
And let you feel
My heart beating for you...
Only for you.

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May 4th, 2009

[Virgil]

Ah, sweet, Turnesol. I wish you the best. :)

[Tournesol]

Ah, sweet, Turnesol. I wish you the best. :)

Thank you Virgil!!

My fiance really likes my poems, and he even attempted one for me! Ha ha..it was lovely though - but then, aren't all things lovely when one is in love?!

[Stargazer86]

It's so sweet whenever you talk about your fiance :) It really sounds like true love, which is so rare nowadays. What a lovely sentimental poem. I feel the same way with the nostalgia for the special moments...but for a different reason. Where your love is blooming and thriving, mine is rapidly disintigrating and dying.
Deep nostalgia sets in...
Silent tears
Because all I want at that moment
Is to hold you to me,
And let you feel
My heart beating for you...
Only for you.


I can feel this so well...and miss it so very much...



I think the sign of good poetry is something that is relatable to people in different situations as this is even though it is about something very particular. Lovely writing

I am very happy for you and wish you all the best in life with this man who is obviously wonderful to you

When are you to be married?