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JTParreira
05-01-2009, 09:52 AM
After the violin snatch the public
they began playing
the fingers one another
until the bottom of the hands

The woman said yes with a left hand
and a right hand of him is imprisoned
maybe forever.


J.T.Parreira

Cellar Door
05-08-2009, 03:08 PM
This is really beautiful... I like the allusions to marriage, especially the uncertainty of it lasting... I liked it very much.

firefangled
05-09-2009, 01:09 PM
JT, I admire your ability to use the physical world to express such ethereal subjects.

breathtest
05-09-2009, 02:13 PM
Man, this is extremely well expressed. It is so beautiful and thoughtful. It has that quality that makes it hard to understand so you just have to read it a number of times