My Girl

[Avalive]

My dear porno girl
Where are you from
And how you were born
What language do you speak
Why I only hear your moan?

My sexy naked girl
Who is your mother
And how you were raised
What dream do you have
Why I only see your bed?

My pink undy girl
When dose your boy date you out
And what he whispers to your mouth
When will he make you a bride
Why you never tell him how?

Oh,My ginger scent girl
When will you stop
And how can you be out
What wish do you cast
Why I never again see your smile?

My ten bucks girl
Where is your sister
And what do you write to her
How will you start to speech
Why I only see lies?

My dear porno girl
When is your birthday
And who gave your the name
How sweet was your father's kiss
Why don't you ever think twice?

[Helga]

Very good, and a 'hush hush' subject. I like it

[Avalive]

Helga,I am glad you like it. It's a subject I always wanted to write,but I had hard time start to pen it. Hehe,you know,I was about to delete the pome,cuz i got this private message says it's not very quite decent here. I do understand this. But when you read the poem, you would know,it's nothing indecent or erotic about it,right? It might be a bit educational. hehe,who knows, just a simple piece of poetry.

Thanks for reading it

ps, can anybody tell how to delete a thread? I didn't find any options to do that

[Bongitybongbong]

I like it. well written

[amuse]

this is wonderful:
My ten bucks girl
Where is your sister
And what do you write to her
it hit me very hard and suddenly

i don't know that we can delete our own works? and i hope you don't delete this one.

[Helga]

Avalive, I don't think it's impotant to delete it at all. I realize that there are underage kids here but the only thing ' indecent' about it was the title, and you changed it. I think it is important to realize that these 'porno girls' aren't different from us in ways of having a family. Some may be on drugs or something worse.

And in my opinion it is a big part of what artists do, cross the line and do something that is a taboo.
I love it!

[kilted exile]

I don't particularly see why it would be inappropriate (no offensive language or anything like that) It reminds me of the song 36D by the Beautiful South.

[Koa]

I dont think there is anything inappropriate and even the title wasn't...i prefered the old title in fact. I think pretty much everything is allowed in art, if it has a reason of course, and this topic is nothing too scandalous...damn, we can't hide from reality!

[SwiftSleigh7]

Such strength of soul it takes to bear one this way.
Do we lose or find ourselves in what we lust for each and every day?
Does hope relay our bitter fears?
Does mystery unveil them?
Of all the porno girl's careers,
are there any less grim
than the knowledge that her only love
might just be another lure,
the knowledge that what she must prove
is carnal and so insecure?
Of all the porno girl's sweet kisses,
soft, sensual, and full of smut
where are all life's sacred blisses
when the beast in heat does rut?
Porno girls, you pretty dancers
on beds so wet with sweat and heat,
you are like a world of cancers
tied up together in one neat sheet.

By the way, your poem was very good, and, as you can see, quite inspirational.

[malikm24]

Who are we to hide what we all know exists,
Life is not just white or balck or grey,
it has many hues,
how can it help us or glorify us if we choose to hide them
knowing as we know, deep within ourselves
that they are there.
A different topic, a nice poem.