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Rob Fusion
04-19-2009, 12:05 AM
Disclaimer:
This isn't my poem but my friends. I'm more of a short story writer.


Simple Spring
Tori Hammerton

There's a moment in time
You see the beauty.
Seeing the bright spring sky
Feel the warmth of the sun on your bare flesh
Look towards the heavans
The colors above
Freeze time, with no worries
No doubts
No regrets
Pick apart the brain of time
Believe what you know
Know that it's meant to be
If it fails; let it fail.
Glance at things beyond your sight.
Into the hands of the unknown

Silas Thorne
04-19-2009, 12:57 AM
Not bad. I really like this line: 'pick apart the brain of time'- excellent!