True love

[sylvia1991]

I waited long to have a true love
I tried many ways ,looked at many
That i might find one
But each time I did, I found myself all alone.

One day i came to know about the one
Who is longing for me, to have my heart
Willing to be with me throughout my life
Ready to hold my hands in all my strife.

Went upto the point of death
That I may have my second birth
Now I've found ,what I've waited for so long
My true Love
My JESUS !!!!!!!!!!!!!


-Rufus Sam

[PrinceMyshkin]

The first two verses set us up to think you'd been searching for romantic love, which makes it hard to leap to the third verse, where Jesus somehow fulfills that search.

[sylvia1991]

The first two verses set us up to think you'd been searching for romantic love, which makes it hard to leap to the third verse, where Jesus somehow fulfills that search.

hey you are correct......first i was searching for a romantic love thinkin that will satisfy my quest for true love....but it failed....only in that failure and dejection i came across the love of JESUS who loved me so much that HE gave HIMSELF on the cross taking my place.....now i've found my "true love"............

[Bach]

I loved the tasteful exclamation marks, tight structure and regular rhyming scheme.