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Lost23Fate
04-17-2009, 11:33 AM
"Voices, Eyes, and Tries"


I always hear these voices
Coming from Above
But one day I find
Its you my love

In my dreams at night
I see this Light
Then I loose all sight
And start to Fright
Then I try with all my might

But I see these eyes
While I start to cry
Remembering the tries
Then I realize
There your eyes

I start to laugh
I start to cry
I start to pry myself
Towards your life

I get half way there
And start to stare
Thinking what its like there
Wondering if you'll share
With me your life

Then I think of you and me
And I see
It has to be
For you and me


-Bryan Hammond

Scheherazade
04-17-2009, 12:55 PM
Is this your own poem, Lost?

Lost23Fate
04-19-2009, 09:41 AM
Yes it is...why?

Logos
04-19-2009, 11:14 AM
Moved from Poets, Poems, and Poetry :)

Lost23Fate
04-19-2009, 04:19 PM
Okay....ummm what?

(Moved from Poets, Poems, and Poetry)

What does this mean??

~Sophia~
04-19-2009, 04:24 PM
It's not a bad thing. It just means you originally posted in the wrong place. Personally written poems are placed here. I think you must have posted in the thread reserved for published poetry.

Cheers and welcome.

Lost23Fate
04-19-2009, 04:25 PM
Oh..haha I was scared...

Thanks...