Chilly
04-14-2009, 08:52 PM
There were still barrels of apples, plums and quinces; buckets of ales and cheap beers; boxes of cured ham and smoked bacon; all standing in the streets waiting to be bought, even at the last minute of the day. The vendors’ yells about selling food, offering even lower amounts as the sun settled down, continued monotonously.
That was part of a story i am writing (until i took it out and completely reworded it) and I'm simply curious as to whether or not it's grammatically correct. Also, if there are any other improvements i can make, please tell me.
One last thing, i was describing a circular room and mentioned its' sides (as in: two doors were on this side, one was on the other). Seeing as how circles can't have straight sides would this be correct?
That was part of a story i am writing (until i took it out and completely reworded it) and I'm simply curious as to whether or not it's grammatically correct. Also, if there are any other improvements i can make, please tell me.
One last thing, i was describing a circular room and mentioned its' sides (as in: two doors were on this side, one was on the other). Seeing as how circles can't have straight sides would this be correct?