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Ohmyscience
03-29-2009, 02:00 AM
It must be cathartic during the apotheosis. More words to accumulate. Rather they be esoteric or common vernacular, let them be distinct. Abate, abet, abound, abuse, to aphasia and apatheia. I read them before but they mean nothing now that I have seen them again. What’s the point? Of course between the pedestrianism and pedantry I ought to be partisan or rather equivocal. I am looking for a word to fill this page. When I find one of eminence imminently where did it emanate or was it immanent? The source is irrelevant. Whether it be seminal or terminal, I have it here. Now all I need is distinction. Just the other day I needed providence to wane so I could focus and when it did my subconscious reverted to my provenance. You would think these are common occurrences linked. Each of our lives like pearls, we are but one necklace. But that is not the case. What’s windfall for me is not always a lost for another so I should find no need to be contrite. Still not enough to pass. There’s no conundrum here but I need respite. Hours upon end I want more. It’s Darwinian really. I know some but another knows more. Just last week vapid visages vituperate my habits and I am back here again. Appropriate isn’t always appropriate. Sometimes in certain context it’s secure. I should need a panacea for my troubles. My worry is quotidian existence. Nothing warrants it or abets it. I will become lethargic at some point and then you can wish me luck for I will need it.

JacobF
03-29-2009, 02:38 AM
Uh, to put it bluntly, what's the point of this? Doesn't seem like much of a story at all.

beroq
03-29-2009, 05:24 AM
Like Sheakespeare's repetition of the words with similar sounds in his sonnets, you succesfully manage to combine sounds despite that fluidity is often disturbed. If you really wished to maintain a sense of obliquennes, you managed it very well.

Ohmyscience
03-30-2009, 02:22 AM
Thanks for the comments. Although this isn't exactly a story I was trying to capture hours on end studying. In this case I was trying to depict the consciousness in trying to memorize words. Hence there is a lot of drifting and grandiose sentences using words that I recently learned or just remembered but was not sure about.

beroq
03-30-2009, 06:09 AM
What’s windfall for me is not always a lost for another so I should find no need to be contrite..

There's a depthness in your story which, as far as I could remember, Horace widely used in his poems. Well done!

prendrelemick
03-30-2009, 09:21 AM
Not a clue what it means, But I like the flow of noises I make when I read it.