Metaphysica

[krymsonkyng]

Physical law persists
without
Why not within

I have method and means
Clockwork in rain
my gears grind on
I am kinematic

I force my way through life
I push I pull
accelerate
Energy is my soul

I've built velocity
can't stop me now
I'm Juggernaut
and momentum's conserved

The body electric
is not my way
the scope's too small
when law persists within

I know myself
I am
Metaphysica






Criticism most welcome.

[mmaria]

I like the rhythm of the poem, its liveliness, its lightness...

[Dark Muse]

Quite interesting there is something appealing about it. It is really very different

[PrinceMyshkin]

What I felt above all was your effort to be truthfully succinct, as if you were using an instrument that might break if pushed too hard.