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Silas Thorne
03-17-2009, 04:31 PM
Robot dog, I love you.
Although I do not have the
two thousand dollars or so
to buy you, you're still waiting,
a happy puppy, scratching clanky cool
with a motorcycle body, and a head
helmeted like Vader,
and a sparkplug tail, a dog
impervious to tooth or nail
or bullets.
And one day
when the economy is better
and when my wife lets me and
if I have discretionary spending
of two thousand dollars or so,
providing the art gallery owners haven't gone bankrupt and
providing you have no other master,
you will be there to guard my house.
I will call you Chip
and you will whirr with delight
and leap bionically metres up into the air
to catch hubcap frizbees in the park
and when my days grow long you will not rust
my faithful metal hound,for I will be your master.

kevinthediltz
03-17-2009, 04:49 PM
I really liked this silas. And how creative you were with the hubcap frisbee and whirring with delight.
The title made me think of the mechanical hound from fahrenhiet 451. :lol:

Silas Thorne
03-17-2009, 05:21 PM
Thanks Kevin. I might read this one in public, it should get a laugh. :) Is that 'Kryptonite Lager' you're drinking?

kevinthediltz
03-17-2009, 05:26 PM
All I know is that its beer that looks like antifreeze.

PrinceMyshkin
03-17-2009, 05:51 PM
One of the happiest (and most funny) love poems I've ever read! And that promise at the end, is it not the same that we long to make to all our lovers, that our love will keep them forever young, hopeful - and free of rust!

God bless your capacity for happiness!!

Silas Thorne
03-17-2009, 06:00 PM
:lol: Thanks a lot. I wasn't sure about its poemness, but I just went with the joy when writing it. It hid in my poetry notebook for a while.

a_little_wisp
03-17-2009, 11:49 PM
(My dad's name is Chip. :D!!!)

The dog actually made me think of Rush from Mega Man, but I'm a nerd.

--- Your robot dog is the PS3 I may never have, or the Complete Collection of Calvin Hobbes I've been drooling over for god knows how long. This poem made me smile, hugely so. Well done, Silas. Such joy! :D

~Sophia~
03-18-2009, 02:27 AM
Let's do a telethon, or better yet, a poemethon to raise the money so you can buy him!!

Happiness is a metal dog sculpture in your own front yard! A real happy shiny poem!!

firefangled
03-18-2009, 02:31 AM
Glad you brought Chip out of its dog house in your poetry book, Silas. It gave me a big smile. Very imaginative!