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mmaria
03-16-2009, 11:09 AM
Your kisses
I don't remember any more
I only remember
your creases

Your words
I don't remember any more
I only remember
your swearwords

Our love nights
I don't remember any more
I only remember
our fights

You ask
why do I still think of you...
Maybe because
love is a hard task...

Dark Muse
03-17-2009, 04:55 PM
I liked the juxposition you used here within the stanzas. It was an interesting concept and it makes me think of the couples who always seem to get along as friends after they break up but only fight if they try and get back together again.

blazeofglory
03-21-2009, 07:34 AM
And love is a hard bargain.