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kelby_lake
03-10-2009, 01:20 PM
In my room
You have often seen me crumbling
One day I shall break in front of you
And then you will know how it is to shatter,
Destroy.
And then you can look upon your work
And see if it was fair or not.
kelby_lake
03-20-2009, 03:46 PM
Comments?
kevinthediltz
03-20-2009, 03:58 PM
A short poem with more power than words.
:)
I like it.
qimissung
03-21-2009, 02:46 AM
Ditto what he said. It is good, and you should know that.