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Jade vu dejA
03-24-2005, 11:26 PM
Winter summer seasons slumber
March to spring or fall asunder
The crash of snow the flakes of thunder
Predictions foiled by natures wonder
The weather fleeting rain turned sleeting
Hail the chief earth’s drum is beating
See a cloud lined silver shroud
Conceals a bolt of golden sound
Blocks sunlight out of deserts drought
Oasis stays or soil dries out
Beneath the dwell tsunamis swell
As Satan shivers in his shell
For cold in heart in hand and bone
Turns weather veins once warm to stone
The rock starts rolling dawn unfolding
New day must break through icy holding

mono
03-25-2005, 02:16 AM
Hello, Jade. Thank you for understanding in posting in this part of the forum your personal poetry. Seeing your other post first of this poem, I responded to that first, leaving a few comments.
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=4246
Welcome to the forum!

amuse
03-25-2005, 02:53 PM
ooh, are you an eagles fan? (or the pic appealed)

Jade vu dejA
03-25-2005, 10:58 PM
Halo, yeah i'm a huge eagles fan. Does that amuse you... haha. Ciao