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PrinceMyshkin
03-06-2009, 08:34 AM
“Well, you know, Dad,”
“Well, you know, Dad,” one of my sons
once said to me, “sometimes your love
is a burden on me.”
I didn’t ask him to explain.
I thought I understood.
I thought, Well, out of my deep love
for you, from now on
I will try to love you
a little bit less...
ampoule
03-06-2009, 09:49 AM
I love this now and then and again.
PrinceMyshkin
03-06-2009, 10:30 AM
I love this now and then and again.
I confess that I love it, too, especially for the paradox in the final lines. That vow I made to myself: is it possibly doable?
symphony
03-06-2009, 10:44 AM
In those last lines, I see such a danger of loving even more in that effort of loving less!
PrinceMyshkin
03-06-2009, 10:52 AM
In those last lines, I see such a danger of loving even more in that effort of loving less!
Thank you my too-long absent friend - and when will we again have the pleasure of one of your beautifully wrought poems?
AuntShecky
03-06-2009, 02:32 PM
Nice example of irony, of which we're hard-pressed to find these
days.
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