Blue shirt

[~Sophia~]

Blue Shirt

You’ve asked me to describe

the singular moment that

I vanish and you become 

a voyeur caught in the act



so I’ve put on your blue shirt, only
fastening the middle three buttons

(because I know you like me to
wear it that way).

The truth is - the moment is not poetic as
the blush of a rose.

The truth is, I feel nothing externally.

Not your hands or your mouth,

the outer body rapaciously
seizing


to contain the riot within.
Jackhammer spinal injections;

an empyreal sequence of current
and exquisite pulsing pain...

I’ve unfastened the last three buttons.

[Silas Thorne]

Woah! That one...well....whew! (fanning myself to stay cool) ....got to loosen my collar a bit. Was that the effect you wanted? :D

[~Sophia~]

Wrote it for an ex before he became and exhttp://www.websmileys.com/sm/cool/914.gif and that blue shirt, I use it to clean paint brushes now. LOL

Thanks for dropping by!

[ampoule]

I understand shirts. ;) Keep on painting. :)

[~Sophia~]

http://www.websmileys.com/sm/crazy/071.gifampoule, that was the best reply!! I think there isn't a woman over the age of 19 that doesn't own one. Thanks!

[firefangled]

Makes me think of the Pussycat Dolls' "Loosen Up My Buttons"

I agree with Silas about having a loose collar on this one. Lucky I'm wearing a T-shirt (not that you asked what I was wearing :blush:)

Well done poem. It had an intriguing title and certainly followed through in its content. So this would be PG-19?

[~Sophia~]

^^^^ What colour is it? http://www.websmileys.com/sm/evil/teu58.gif:lol:
Considering South Park and The Simpsons, I'd say it comes in around PG-7! http://www.websmileys.com/sm/cartoon/1217.gif

[firefangled]

^^^^ What colour is it? http://www.websmileys.com/sm/evil/teu58.gif:lol:
Considering South Park and The Simpsons, I'd say it comes in around PG-7! http://www.websmileys.com/sm/cartoon/1217.gif

:lol: :lol: :lol:

My shirt is not white, despite that recent prayer. ;) To continue this call enter your credit card number now. Charges are $5.95 per minute. :D

Ah yes, SP and Simpsons (Homer being the contemporary american Leopold Bloom).

[~Sophia~]

Visa 3404 1872 0773 **** exp 11/12. http://www.websmileys.com/sm/cartoon/1221.gif

[Virgil]

Wow, I missed this yesterday. Quite arrousing. :D

The heart of the poem was outstanding:

The truth is - the moment is not poetic as
the blush of a rose.

The truth is, I feel nothing externally.

Not your hands or your mouth,

the outer body rapaciously
seizing


to contain the riot within.
Well, done. Could have come out corny but it didn't. :)

Now I wonder if I can talk my wife into just a blue shirt tonight. :blush:

[~Sophia~]

Now I wonder if I can talk my wife into just a blue shirt tonight. :blush:

Read her some poetry. It always worked on me! http://www.websmileys.com/sm/love/lieb47.gif