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hoope
02-28-2009, 03:47 PM
This is my first writing about love, i never tried writing about it..
I was afraid that it might not be felt by the people..
so i wanted to come with something that is more emotional, something that is touching..
hope its worth.. & waiting for your comments..




Hard to say goodbye

To move on , to start again , to say goodbye forever . How hard that might be .
There are moments when departure is the only choice we have .Times when love can't even stop it; other times when it fails.
Yet! Deep in our heart something has been moved, something is not the same , someone has meant a lot to us . And that thing that has changed me could be you.
It’s the love that made me bear all your actions , its love that made me blind from seeing the truth , the truth that I was nothing to you . And its also the love that will make me leave now, leave forever. Soon will be oceans apart & miles away.

Its strange how sometimes love doesn't end happily. How sometimes it fails ; its not always as it seems to be because there's much more hidden out there.
Its difficult how to say it " GOODBYE ". For you have left in a scar that won't heal , you have left eyes full of tears , left with moments so sweet . Its hard to look behind at those days we had & say " I'll forget"

Do I really have to rub those tears?
Coz am afraid that with it I'll rub your memory too.

Do I have to start all over again ?
Coz I know that I won't find anyone who shares half of your character.

I wonder how long it will take to forget? I wonder why we have to fall in love after all ; if it hurts so much .
I never believed in love but in novels & books; in fairy tales and not in real world .
Well , I hate to admit that I really fell in love . Yes! " I love you " And I will always do so, I love you talk , I love your words , I love your silence , I love your eyes; I love it all. I pray for you always to be safe , I pray God to protect you, to guide you . And I wish you find the one you're searching for; I say it with lots of tears in my eyes. I say it coz I live you & I love to see you happy with the person you love.
And when I hear you talk about your love; its eats me from inside but I smile coz you're so happy and that's all I care about . I listen ,I tell you what to do . Though it's hard but I like it to be your friend, I like it when you come to me for advice . And I can't ever hate you coz I can't.
Now its time to run away and never look behind , I thought I found my soul mate ; I guess I was wrong . And I no longer can stay in the shadow. You know it ! that I have some feeling for you ; its just that you share me the same feeling and yet " I LOVE YOU "
I'll go collect all the pieces of my broken life and try to start again . I will do my best to love again but I don't promise it will be as I loved you , my love!

As I put my face done; my eyes full of tears ; trying to cover it .I say " farewell "that was the cry of my heart. And not goodbye coz I who knows we may meet when we least expect it.

Eugenie
02-28-2009, 03:56 PM
As for the emotions your work evoked, it made me mist up. And I loved when you asked if you had to rub the tears from your eyes, you were afraid that would remove the memories. That is lovely.
I got lost in how you wrote it though, it seems a bit jumbled. But I am no expert, so take that with a grain of salt.

hoope
03-06-2009, 08:10 AM
hi Eugeine..
thx alot for you reply...

yea me too i felt that its a bit jumbled up & down.. though i wanted to jsut to try ..

have a great time

blazeofglory
03-08-2009, 05:19 AM
Full of emotion and spirit. There is very touching stuff in your poem.