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Mr. Bergstrom
02-25-2009, 03:18 PM
Prague

Prague, and a bus window revitalised me,
flashing a reflection
of you and me
holding hands under an umbrella.
Behind us, a flower seller reminding us
of our change
abandoned in his hands.
Oblivious to anyone other than ourselves
we stared at the yellow shelves
of jewelry stores
melting like butter
in a downpour over Prague. My heart
manipulated by a fancy restaurant
quivering in a puddle, I proposed.
Street lamps shone through the trees as jewelry
illuminating bird nests, the brittle attics of Prague.
The city in which you punctured my heart.

© 2009 Martin Daniels

PrinceMyshkin
02-25-2009, 03:44 PM
Wonderfully vivid throughout, without any straining for 'poetic' effect, but these lines


the brittle attics of Prague.
The city in which you punctured my heart.

© 2009 Martin Daniels

just about punctured my heart. Bravo!

subterranean
02-25-2009, 05:46 PM
It's a pretty poem. I was in Prague during winter 2007 and when I was there I could clearly imagine how beautiful it must be during spring or summer. I try to imagine it thru your lines.