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formality hater
02-22-2009, 02:38 PM
Once in a blue moon,
I saw her eyes,
Her brilliant gaze injured me,
But they reflected what,
Her smile could not,
A life which lacked,
Real surprise!

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You and me,
We are a silent movie,
With so much to say,
In unspoken words,
With so much to hear,
In our silent world,
We tread towards,
A mute ending!

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Please, comment.

EddieZ
02-22-2009, 03:30 PM
they are very creative and exciting to read, it all goes together. i would enjoy reading more ^_^

formality hater
02-23-2009, 12:24 PM
Thanks EddieZ and a warm welcome to you!