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a_little_wisp
02-20-2009, 01:57 AM
Attached is a poem... I wasn't sure how I was going to work it out on the message board, so I posted it as an image! If it's too small, just tell me, I'll edit it. Oh, and the asterisk * beside "half-sick of shadows" means it belongs to Mr. Tennyson, and the Lady of Shalott who cried it out.

EDIT:

Resized version below. ^^

Virgil
02-20-2009, 01:59 AM
Very clever Wisp. :)

~Sophia~
02-20-2009, 02:09 AM
Oh, I so want to read this but, I'm on a Mac and Bill Gates is evil. Can you make it bigger? Please!!!!!!!!!!

a_little_wisp
02-20-2009, 03:33 AM
Due to the numerous exclamation marks - I SHALL HURRY. :lol: One mo.

This thing is driving me bonkers. Ok... Hmm.....

~Sophia~
02-20-2009, 03:35 AM
Blessed be!


edit: Okay sorry, I don't really do that (computer blip ) but bump it up.......please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

Lokasenna
02-20-2009, 06:25 AM
You manage to capture the capture the an amazing snapshot of a mind here. Really good stream-of-conciousness stuff!

Pendragon
02-20-2009, 08:25 AM
Visual poetry! Love it! :thumbs_up

PrinceMyshkin
02-20-2009, 11:32 AM
You may be your "worst enemy," as you claim, but which of us would not be proud and overjoyed to have you as (one of) their best friends?

There's a saying I much admire by the theologian, AJ Heschel



"To be is a blessing; to live is holy."

You live, it seems to me, enough for any three of us. If I were sleep, I'd surrender to you any time of the day or night!

Dori
02-20-2009, 02:22 PM
Knowing there was a second attachment would have been helpful in the first place. :p
I pressed Ctrl++ about five times (in other words, I zoomed in quite a bit) which allowed me to read everything but the last bit.

Anyway, I loved it! All in all, as Virgil said, very clever (especially that last bit). :thumbs_up

a_little_wisp
02-20-2009, 04:06 PM
Virgil, I tried. I really tried. :lol: It certainly didn't start off as Z's. I wrote it and was determined to make it into something more.



Lokasenna,


You manage to capture the capture the an amazing snapshot of a mind here. Really good stream-of-conciousness stuff!

Thank you!!! Thank you so much!!

Pendragon,

Thank you very much!! I wish more people wrote some - this was my first attempt, except that one time in middle school where I tried to make a cat, but... hahaha oh my :lol:. I remember the last of it I read was in early highschool, and the best of it I read was in middle school. So more people should try it, it's neat!

Prince!!!! Hullo! Could you pass that on to Morpheus for me? :lol: Thank you so much, dear, you always say just the right thing. As for Heschel, I think he had it right, absolutely. I'll be keeping that quote with me for the rest of the day.

Dori, sorry about that!!!! I edited it, though I'm sorry you had to suffer for it. :( I'm glad you actually got to read the last bit, though, and that you liked it. :D thank you very much.

easyeverett
02-20-2009, 04:16 PM
I am thrilled to have you as my friend little wisp. You can borrow from
Tennyson anytime you want as far as I'm concerned and never give it
back either. You are a creative gem of the first order my friend. easy

~Sophia~
02-21-2009, 12:18 AM
Sorry for not replying sooner. I've been under the weather today but I do want to say, I FINALLY GOT TO READ IT AND MAN, WAS IT WORTH THE WAIT!!!http://www.websmileys.com/sm/aliens/hae48.gif. Hope you are catching some Zsssss tonight (no wait it's Friday...) Great poem Wisp.

a_little_wisp
02-21-2009, 02:07 AM
Sorry for not replying sooner. I've been under the weather today but I do want to say, I FINALLY GOT TO READ IT AND MAN, WAS IT WORTH THE WAIT!!!http://www.websmileys.com/sm/aliens/hae48.gif. Hope you are catching some Zsssss tonight (no wait it's Friday...) Great poem Wisp.


Thank you, dearest!!!! :D :D :D

I'm so not catching any Z's. I basically just got home from work. It's Friday, but there's nowhere open in this town after 12:00 worth hitting up! :lol:

I hope you feel better though. :( Have a cup of tea and get some rest. Love yous!

P.S. WHAT AN ADORABLE BLOB THING.

~Sophia~
02-21-2009, 02:54 AM
Getting there on the better thing. A bit of nasty chicken for lunch and you are down for the count http://www.websmileys.com/sm/crazy/086.gif

Places here just get going at midnight. Open 24/7 ... come on down! http://www.websmileys.com/sm/drink/trink13.gif Cervesa till dawn and free room!

You too can have the cute blob things http://www.websmileys.com/drink.htm
just copy and paste! XO