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easyeverett
02-18-2009, 06:42 PM
Your body glides seductively through space
to calmly capture human hearts.
Each human eye now focused on your face,
as awestruck life now lingers then departs.

Such beauty punishes all logic's form
and leaves bewildered probability.
You are the rare most perfect human storm,
now redefining base reality.

The book of beauty proudly takes due note
of nuanced tic and movement gaily made,
as you adorn yourself with cosmic coat
then into universal blackness fade.

You are the soul, the very whole, the One;
The radiance of causal force: The Sun.

Silas Thorne
02-19-2009, 04:12 AM
A striking and beautiful piece, which hums with awe for the burning globe. I feel each syllable and don't feel any are out of place.

easyeverett
02-19-2009, 09:06 AM
It is always such a pleasure to find someone who
loves the sonnet form Silas. I am humbled and most
pleased you enjoyed this English sonnet. I love the
form and texture of the Bard's private obsession.
Thank you Silas. easy

qimissung
02-19-2009, 11:34 PM
This is beautiful,and you make it seem so easy!

Pendragon
02-20-2009, 08:21 AM
Truly fantastic! :thumbs_up

easyeverett
02-20-2009, 10:47 AM
Silas, Gimissung and Pendragon, you all have honored my
sonnet to honor the Bard and I thank you all very, very
much. You are most encouraging and I like all poets need
that encouragment like I need water. Thanks again my three
chingo amigo's. tom