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Mr.K
02-16-2009, 08:19 PM
Step into the shade with me
My kiss is in the winds
Spark my fading love for you, and rest my tired limbs

Awakened from your warm embrace
By chanting in my heart
Rested legs and restless mind, I know I must depart

Behind me lies a trail of lies
Broken hearts and words
But all I can but focus on, is wandering the world

Where I’m going no one knows
And least of all myself
A lonesome man of low esteem, the travelling my wealth

A wanderer by blood, I am
A wanderer by soul
A wanderer by God himself, the wandering my goal

Silas Thorne
02-16-2009, 08:26 PM
Beautiful lyrical verse! :)
However, the rhyme slips a bit in the third stanza, 'Words' and 'world' don't fit quite as well as the rhyme in the other stanzas.

Mr.K
02-17-2009, 06:21 PM
Thank you. I agree with you, but for the moment i can't seem to find anything that fits.