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Silas Thorne
02-15-2009, 09:13 PM
Summer raindrops fall
Jurassic echoes,
pushing round sets and subsets
into morning's lake.
Dark Muse
02-15-2009, 11:13 PM
Interesting, quite short, but rather moving, some lovely imagery
~Sophia~
02-16-2009, 01:30 AM
I like the whole thing but in particular, these lines:


Summer raindrops fall
Jurassic echoes,
pushing round sets and subsets
into morning's lake.

Nice!