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The Rider
02-15-2009, 12:18 AM
A Rainless Thunder
brings sentries to scorched earth

yet only by turning from the wind

can one see
The Seedlings Hidden Beneath the Sand


Thought I had already posted this but couldn't find it... oh well! Here it is.
Delta40
02-15-2009, 06:54 PM
I think of Australia reading this. My initial impression only. then I have an expectation of rain but you haven't written about it!!!!
PrinceMyshkin
02-15-2009, 07:05 PM
A Rainless Thunder
brings sentries to scorched earth

and only by turning from the wind

can one see
The Seedlings Hidden Beneath the Sand


Thought I had already posted this but couldn't find it... oh well! Here it is.

The brevity lends it a Blakean air of the mystical. Great!
The Rider
02-17-2009, 05:46 PM
Thank you both! Delta, I promise to write you a poem about rain very soon.