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Silas Thorne
02-14-2009, 04:24 AM
At the top of this morning
wee Willy was more awake than I was
perhaps he had been taking iron supplements
or thought he was a soldier on dawn parade
or, head tilted back,
wanted to watch the stars through the bathroom skylight
but anyway, he stood up proudly
and despite my demands
and protestations,
wouldn't sit down and relax.
So, though I was tired
I had to stand on my head
to take a pee.

© Silas Thorne
14.02.09

~Sophia~
02-14-2009, 08:43 AM
This is hysterical Silas. Wee Willie must be excited that it's Valentine's Day! Such vivid imagery throughout but, I think I love the last three lines best! :lol:

Silas Thorne
02-15-2009, 05:11 AM
Thanks Sophia. Ideas come to me in the weirdest of places, and I don't want to shut them out. ;)

Jocafer
02-15-2009, 08:41 AM
hahaha nice one dude :))

firefangled
02-15-2009, 10:00 AM
Ah yes, Hathahardon yoga!

Delta40
02-15-2009, 06:51 PM
that's wonderfully humourous silas. What about writing the life cycle of Willy - (his waning interest in the stars for example lol)

Thanks for a putting a smile on my face this morning at work.

PrinceMyshkin
02-15-2009, 07:07 PM
But surely he doesn't think of himself as wee! Great fun!

Delta40
02-15-2009, 07:38 PM
Well he can't be 12 inches because then he would be a foot!

PrinceMyshkin
02-15-2009, 07:53 PM
Well he can't be 12 inches because then he would be a foot!

There must be a special place in hell for punsters! (But this is a good one.)