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ShadowFire
02-13-2009, 12:38 AM
Aloft and Silent

I watch the moons pass
Every night longer than the last

I draw breath into me
The fog making each harder to be

I cry a single salty tear
Just one every passing year

I listen to the river run
As I count the seconds since I begun

I touch the cold rocks
The wind whispers and mocks

I smell the sweet grass
Of every meadow I can't enter, but pass

I sit alone on a branch of a tree
Aloft and silent for all to see

Dark Muse
02-13-2009, 01:58 AM
This was beautiful and very moving. Such lovely imagery and emotions envoked

crystalmoonshin
02-13-2009, 07:15 AM
This is so sad... just the perfect poem for spending Valentine's Day tomorrow coz I'm single haha. (Though I don't really mind being one.) :)

Xcape
02-15-2009, 11:58 AM
So hauntingly beautiful :)

Veva
02-15-2009, 12:38 PM
It is simple but sophisticated... love it

ShadowFire
03-02-2009, 09:02 PM
Thanks everyone for your comments.

blazeofglory
03-02-2009, 09:25 PM
This is romanticizing piece. We get lost in a world of beauty and wonder.

adwara1
03-02-2009, 09:37 PM
Good One