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[kceoir]

Please Let me know what you think even if it's 2 words.

Everything rushing through my mind
Too quickly to put into words
It all seems so confusing
Like the inside of your brain
Like fileing cabnets with too much paper
Like last weeks su do ku
I’ll give you all I can
Not sure what I have to spare
I’m being spread too thin
Like a poor painters water colour
Like a small ring over a fat mans finger
Like the end of the toilet roll
I am always feeling so weak
If my mind is happy
My body must suffer

[JBI]

Oh, two words, O.K.

Wrong Forum

or, how about three? Read Before Posting.

Seriously, the stickies which say read before posting are there for a reason.

[kceoir]

Oh, two words, O.K.

Wrong Forum

or, how about three? Read Before Posting.

Seriously, the stickies which say read before posting are there for a reason.

Sorry but you don't have to be such an ***

[hoope]

well.. yea i guess JBI tries to say that it has to be @ the personal Poetry..
no need to be so harsh though...


I’ll give you all I can
Not sure what I have to spare
I’m being spread too thin\

like these lines...
yet u can write more better than this..
waiting to read more from u :)