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thokkjuk
02-10-2009, 07:32 PM
Haikus are real neat
Sometimes they don't make much sense
Refrigerator
crystalmoonshin
02-12-2009, 07:27 AM
haha that's COLD!!!
Silas Thorne
02-12-2009, 04:22 PM
:)

Yes, smash up haiku with a wooden hammer!
Silas Thorne
02-12-2009, 04:23 PM
put a stake through it's heart and twist it until all the air comes out.
~Sophia~
02-12-2009, 06:45 PM
put a stake through it's
heart and twist it until all the
air comes out pfft pfft

just thought I'd finish it for you LOL.
crystalmoonshin
02-13-2009, 07:07 AM
the second line's got 8 syllables!!!
~Sophia~
02-13-2009, 08:32 PM
yikes you're right! I can't even claim dyslexia!

Revised:

put a stake through its
heart and twist until all the
air comes out pfft pfft
crystalmoonshin
02-14-2009, 05:50 AM
and isn't it supposed to be "put a stake through its"?
~Sophia~
02-14-2009, 08:28 AM
Right again. Thanks Crystalmoonshin. Guess I didn't put a whole lot of thought into it when I cut and pasted.
dramasnot6
02-14-2009, 09:51 AM
Cut and Pasted
Scissors and snagglepusses
snip snip glue glue Splash.
crystalmoonshin
02-17-2009, 08:10 AM
first line's got just 4 syllables!!!

why not "Cut and then pasted'? just a suggestion :)