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s1ndome
02-09-2009, 12:19 AM
This is my first poem, its not very good compared to everyone elses ive read. Its about the feelings i have from my latest and first heartbreak. Exciting eh?
Black lights,distorted vision
Clouds but no rain
Flashing of lightning
A gust of wind
Furious fires blaze
My thoughts a maze
All in my head, pictures of you
I dont wanna miss you
Once a safe path, now filled with wrath
Look at the aftermath
A beat as one-is done
My walls to you
A new time for two
Leaving the crew
Worst hopes for you die so fast
As the rain runs past
Was your light found
Or never the same sound
Only time will tell
For gods sake, go to hell
The wiring is undone
And my thoughts unsung
Love is malice
And malice is my maker
Hate is living in us
Mines about to rust
Mind mending matter made memories die
Crows claw carved cracks on broken dreams
But you are nothing to me
Only something that could be
Delta40
02-09-2009, 12:42 AM
I don't know. I can certainly feel the passion. Your head hung as you clutch your fist to your breast......oh love! why do you do this to me?????
I like it!
s1ndome
02-12-2009, 12:45 AM
Hell in your eyes
Follow
Follow me
You spoke without words
Trust was needed
The barrier was broken
New
Something new
Unlit wick ,light the way
Twist and turn, leap or two
Fast the sun and moon came
Black
Black script
As blind as my eyes
Black as your heart
Still unknown to me
Worth
Worthless
Footprints in the snow
Left here to freeze
Under the blizzards fall
Freeze
Freezing
Cure to the pain
A possibility I will keep
(Not sure why my writing came out in the formation. Just did. Hope you enjoy. Thanks for reading)
s1ndome
02-12-2009, 12:55 AM
Lost to them all
Spending my days alone
Wandering like a drone
You struggled to stay above water
With a life no one wants to live
You took my hand and ran
The light you discovered
Your life was recovered
And your lost to them all
Up against the odds
Backs to the wall
Held each other to not fall
A feeling of hope filled our mind
As I let you drink the wine
You took my hand and ran
The light you discovered
Your life was recovered
And your lost to them all
Starting of strong, started at a run
A feeling grew, something new
So with the play of your card and smell of the rose
Never let go
You took my hand and ran
The light you discovered
Your life was recovered
And your lost to them all
Simple mistakes took us away
A new gift for you
Only one to give
I love you always, for all my days
Never let go
You took my hand and ran
The light you discovered
Your life was recovered
And your lost to them all
Flowers to die
Within days, a loose lynch to tie
A pull of my strings-the world is yours
A game to you, I'm not sure
A roll of the dice, battle of your life
Your colors are true, no option for two
I watched as you fled, not using your head
Rage filled my soul, death is the toll
Heart burst to flames
Then came the rain
A light i once knew-I cant follow you
I turned my back that night and flew
You took my hand and ran
The light you discovered
Your life was recovered
And your lost to them all
We set off to sea
Backs to the wall
But how did you fall
And now your lost to them all
(Hope you enjoyed this. If your wondering why it is how it is, it is meant to be a song. But a poem is just the same to me.)
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