A Few Poems of mine

[Akshay]

I have written a few poems so just wanted every one to read it

the poems are at the following link

http://www.poemhunter.com/akshay-srinivasan/:idea::)

[Silas Thorne]

Sorry, didn't have time to look over all your poems as yet, but I read 'Come what may brother' and thought it was beautiful. These lines jumped out at me, shook me by the lapels and held my attention:
'Shadows may follow like unsketched people
But they fade away with light and dark'
Wonderful. I'll read more of your poems later. :)