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Makai
02-02-2009, 12:20 PM
For this poetess
after loosing my words
I check all the cupboards
in my inspiration stations

To find them barren
yawning
empty egg sacks,
producing
nothing viable

Except a few cobwebbed
disappointed moths,
that when released
vagabond away

Hands feel leaden,
the same loss
I felt when my child
outgrew them,
to find his own way
part of me is gone

They say patience
is a virtue,
but I am a sinner
Wicked faults
bedevil me

PrinceMyshkin
02-02-2009, 01:55 PM
I appreciated the whole of this for the easy, spontaneous voice, but these lines



Hands feel leaden,
the same loss
I felt when my child
outgrew them

stood out for me. Thanks.