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Marley
01-28-2009, 12:36 PM
Love Is

Love is when you cant sleep because you are thinking bout tht special someone to much.

Love is the falme that started with a spark.

Love is staying up till five to four in the morning on the phone.

Love is wondering if they still think of you even after you have said goodbye.

Love is what makes life.




How It Started

It satrted with a game of mercie.

Which lead to a hug.

Which lead to a kiss.

Which lead to a sprark.

Which lit the falme of the undieing love.

Pendragon
01-28-2009, 03:53 PM
Love Is

Love is when you cant sleep because you are thinking bout tht special someone to much.

Love is the falme that started with a spark.

Love is staying up till five to four in the morning on the phone.

Love is wondering if they still think of you even after you have said goodbye.

Love is what makes life.




How It Started

It satrted with a game of mercie.

Which lead to a hug.

Which lead to a kiss.

Which lead to a sprark.

Which lit the falme of the undieing love.

With Love Is, I would replace the is with a dash thus:

Love--when you cant sleep because you are thinking bout tht special someone to much.

Love--the falme that started with a spark.

Love--staying up till five to four in the morning on the phone.

Love--wondering if they still think of you even after you have said goodbye.

Love--what makes life.

Marley
01-28-2009, 03:54 PM
With Love Is, I would replace the is with a dash thus:

Love--when you cant sleep because you are thinking bout tht special someone to much.

Love--the falme that started with a spark.

Love--staying up till five to four in the morning on the phone.

Love--wondering if they still think of you even after you have said goodbye.

Love--what makes life.
thaxz for you input