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Pendragon
01-27-2009, 06:42 PM
It Is Not the End

The fog hangs like a shroud in the skeleton trees,
The wind is moaning like a forgotten soul—
The trees bow before him, but they won’t bend the knees,
Far too old are they and too strong.
The icicle fangs hang up high in the branches,
Where the leaves will burst forth in the spring—
Promise of hope, and of second chances,
That death is truly not the end of all things…
Down by the oak roots, a broken gravestone stands,
Remembrance of someone now passed and gone—
Dust unto dust, the way everything ends,
Out on a hillside, so quiet and alone…
But if the leaves and the flowers come back again,
Perhaps there is still returning for the children of men…

Pendragon
© 1/27/2009

A Sonnet From the Dragon

Dark Muse
01-27-2009, 09:26 PM
oooh I really like this one. It had great imagery, and will all the talk of the trees it was very Celtic

Delta40
01-28-2009, 12:30 AM
Where's Vincent Price when you need him....

eyemaker
01-28-2009, 12:33 AM
Keep it up uncle pen!:D I really loved it!:D

kiz_paws
01-28-2009, 04:55 AM
I could picture those trees bowing and the icicle fangs -- very vivid imagery. I liked your sonnet a lot, Pen! :nod:

PrinceMyshkin
01-28-2009, 08:42 AM
Take this as a supreme compliment, but I wasn't so much conscious that I was reading a poem - a literary artifact - as the unfettered outflowing of a man's soul, and what splendid humility there is


Perhaps there is still returning for the children of men…

in that "Perhaps"! Hope, but nothing of the arrogance of belief.

Pendragon
01-28-2009, 03:47 PM
Thank you. Wrote this one standing out in a light rain last evening...

And thanks Jer, for the humility comment... :)

Virgil
01-28-2009, 04:08 PM
Wonderful Pen. I think this is excellent.

jekan blazer
01-28-2009, 04:37 PM
:thumbs_upvery good... i liked it a lot

firefangled
01-28-2009, 05:35 PM
Wonderful sonnet, Pen. I enjoyed it.

arabian night
01-28-2009, 08:37 PM
This is really good, and as others have said, it is full of imagery.

"That death is truly not the end of all things…"

This line really attracted my attention because we all consider life as a first and last station in our life, while it is not. life is but a journey you take to reach the ultimate place.

Would love to read more :)