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ceradoyle
01-24-2009, 03:50 PM
Hi i'm new here, maybe i should tell you something about myself and maybe i shouldn't but for my first thread, here's a little poem i wrote, feel free to critique:

start/end.

Is this the start?
Is this the end?
Only one way to break a trend.
And for things coming,
And for things going,
The tell-tale seasons winds are blowing.

I know its only short but its my first post and i dont want to give too much away :)

lucidnightmares
01-25-2009, 01:53 AM
welcome to the boards
nice little piece, it`s kinda catchy.
looking forward to seeing more from you.