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jekan blazer
01-23-2009, 05:05 PM
A young elf walked silently through the dense forest, his loyal spirit-dragon stalking close by. As it looked up at him, whining worriedly, her pearlecent blue scales shimmered.

"It's okay, Evian, we'll be okay." the elf said softly

"I hope you're right, Spirit Fire. I would hate to have to kill you." Evian said telepathicly.

Spirit Fire smiled nervously and scratched behind her ears. He was tall, extremely pale, and had long, pointy ears. His left eye has blank, but could see ghosts and spirits. It also had a jagged scar going over it. His hair was blonde and untidy. He wore a mesh shirt, and a tunic bottom. his arm had left arm had flames tattooed on it. His forehead had a v-shaped tattoo that allowed him to communicate with Evian, and other spirit animals.

Spirit Fire continued to walk. Suddenly, a bush ten feet of to his left rustled. Evian growled deeply.

"What is it, Evian?" He asked.

"Danger. I can feel the hostility emminating from the bush." She replied fiercely.

Spitit Fire gazed at the shrub with his blank, pupil-less eye, trying to detect any traces of ectoplasmic entities, but found none. He soundlessly unsheathed his deadly twin hand scythes form his back, and telepathed Evian to stay. Cautiously, the young elven warrior edged closer and closer, untill he was within five feet of the plant thaqt was making Evian so uppity. Then, he heard sounds. They sounded frantic, almost desparate.

Assuming his battle stance, so as not to be misheard, Spirit Fire spoke loudly and clearly, saying, "I am Spirit Fire, the last of the elven clan, Inara. Show yourself, or I will kill you."

A small, black, wolf-like creature emerged slowly from the foliage, followed by an elf.

The unkown elf stated, "Hello, Spirit Fire. We maen you no harm. My name is Lunaro of the Arcana clan, and this is my spirit-wolf, Eclipse."



Lunaro had dark skin, wore only a tunic bottom and necklace, and had jet black hair that puffed out like an inflated blowfish. His two only tattoos were on his stomach and forehead. The one on his belly was a crescent moon that went around his naval. the one on his forehead was simmilar. the only difference was it had a single dot that it went around.

"Evian, you can come, but stay on guard." Spirit Fire telepathed, then said this is Evian, my spirit-dragon. Evian, say hello to Lunaro and Eclipse.'

"Hello," she thought to them.

"Greetings, Evian," Lunaro smiled as he talked. Realizing that Spirit Fire was in an attack posture, he asked, "Why do you still brandish your weapons towards me? do you mean to harm me?"

"Sorry," he said sheepishly, "I forgot I had them out."

Embarrassed, he sheathed the scythes as Evian telepathed to him angrily, "You're going to kill us like that one of these days..."



to be continued...

1n50mn14
01-23-2009, 08:46 PM
A little bland. Pad it out a bit more, more description, more interesting language, etc.

Niamh
01-24-2009, 09:06 AM
I love elves but this left me a bit baffled...