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jon1jt
01-19-2009, 12:30 AM
**Previously posted, but revised. Hope nobody minds.

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seagull

ASHERA
01-20-2009, 12:38 AM
these poems i love
one like above -
the moment caught
and too, your thought
that part of you
that you did share
an brief insight
a gift so rare

Riesa
01-20-2009, 02:28 AM
yikes.


pretty poetry in your poem though, like

"in my shadow cast you tore off
leaving behind your voice "