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hoope
01-11-2009, 07:55 AM
"The Darkest Hour Is that before the Dawn "


No matter how dark the night might be , the dawn will eventually come . No matter how wrong it is , something may happen that changes it.

You just have to keep believing in it . I agree with you , there are many hard days .There are many obstacles .But nothing is always the same . I understand how hard it is when dreams don't come true. When sun never shines, when the only , only raining cloud , rains on you .When you keep on crying and there is no one to wipe your tears.
You always wake up every morning and put a fake smile on your face but one day will come that you no longer can put that fake smile. That your no longer can hide your tears, one day it will show how sad your face is, how your eyes are full of tears . The miserable days you have been through , the pain you live in .
Yea ! you can't always hide it .

hoope
01-11-2009, 07:56 AM
i wrote it couple days ago ... waiting 4 ur comments...
its short & simple .. not much but hope you like it :-)

prendrelemick
01-11-2009, 09:42 AM
You need to continue, to give a sniff of the hope that is in the title.

hoope
01-11-2009, 10:00 AM
You need to continue, to give a sniff of the hope that is in the title.

yea sure.. i know it has to be long
actually i was in the lecture when i wrote it
thx 4 ur comment & 4 steppin by:)

LostPrincess13
01-11-2009, 10:59 AM
*sniff* *fights back tears* I did a piece similar to this in art class once... It was called 'The Bottle'... Got an A on it...:) Thanks for sharing that piece...:)

hoope
01-11-2009, 02:12 PM
*sniff* *fights back tears* I did a piece similar to this in art class once... It was called 'The Bottle'... Got an A on it...:) Thanks for sharing that piece...:)


thx alot lOST PRINCESS.. 4 ur lovely comment

Emil Miller
01-11-2009, 03:27 PM
Love you Hoope.
Proud to be your friend.

hoope
01-12-2009, 12:38 PM
Love you Hoope.
Proud to be your friend.

hey brian ..
thx alot 4 stepping by ... me too am glad to be ur friend :-)

arabian night
01-23-2009, 12:38 PM
I love it :) Indeed, no matter how things gets complicated, something will eventually solve the problem. Life is always changing; we are not the same person we were one year ago. That is why I love reading my diary, it shows me how different I was :) Good luck, I have written something similar three years ago, if you want I can post it here :) cheers

Veva
01-24-2009, 10:24 AM
yes, but what if there are some of us who are too tired to wait for the dawn... I think you should give a less optimistic advice ...